Topic How Apple Inc. Marketing Affects China and the USA
Focus on: -Introduction of figures: it is not enough to include the figure, it has to be explained too. -Organisation: -your introduction has to contain brief information about the marketing strategies. -you need to include a thesis statement: your main aim and the outline of your essay. -your conclusion is too short; it should not contain in text citations as you should not include any new information in it; your conclusion should re-state the aim of the essay & summarise key points. -you should include limitations & further research section. -you should not be discussing advantages & disadvantages, but you need to focus on the marketing strategies, Apple Inc. uses in two countries. -Formatting: make sure the way you format present your essay is consistent.